The Wayfarer (mnfaure) wrote,
The Wayfarer


 Before posting for help last night  week, I was convinced that those who chose to answer would go with snippet 1.  Surprisingly only two people did. And they chose it for the reasons that I, too, thought it would be the sure winner. Just goes to show how much I know and how subjective these things are.

In any case, you all gave me a lot to think about.  Thanks so much for your feedback.
Tags: that thing called writing, witherwilds
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