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Snippet Sunday

New chapter this week!

I am still feeling my way around in this one, but I have an idea about what it needs to accomplish. I'm hoping throwing words at the page will magically make clarity happen in the old gray matter. Yes, one can always hope.




"I don't feel well." Baxente pushed away from the worktable and grimaced as he used both hands to lift his aching leg over the bench.

"You rarely do, Peirain."

That time the reproach was more thinly veiled, and from the hard look in Omusul's eyes, Baxente was meant to hear it. Omusul lowered his gaze and shook out the bundle he was carrying: Baxente's tamba of office, the heavy scarlet fabric glimmering with borders worked in gold and silver.

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frigg
Mar. 31st, 2013 09:17 pm (UTC)
Nice!
mnfaure
Apr. 2nd, 2013 01:49 pm (UTC)
I hope I have it figured out this time. Will message you more.
asakiyume
Apr. 1st, 2013 08:38 am (UTC)
Yay yay yay! Sounding good. And! I will get to read chapter 2 tomorrow (... or rather, later today, since it's morning here now really--but I am going to go get a couple more hours of sleep) so that's EXTRA yay!
mnfaure
Apr. 2nd, 2013 01:42 pm (UTC)
Hooray! I just read your comments. Email to follow.

*HUGS*
mindseas
Apr. 2nd, 2013 12:15 pm (UTC)
Poor Bax!
mnfaure
Apr. 2nd, 2013 01:41 pm (UTC)
Yeah, he's going to have a rough time of it in this chapter. I hope it will achieve what a chapter should. It's had me stumped for many a month.
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