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Snippet Sunday


I wanted to do something different this week, but the day got away from me. You shall have a rough snippet as usual...

How about some totally out of context dialogue? Works for me.

“You maybe speak Semborain?” Fedo said.

Mirco sagged in surprise, but Fedo’s grip did not relax. Hissing, Mirco lifted back onto his knees. “Maybe I do, but maybe I don’t want to speak to sneaks who attack people for no reason.”

“There is a dead man in there and you watch us. That seems reason for caution.”

“There’s caution and there’s throwing people around, trying to beat them. Making them kneel like slaves.”

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frigg
Aug. 12th, 2012 09:16 pm (UTC)
And when am I going to get to beta read????
mnfaure
Aug. 13th, 2012 08:51 pm (UTC)
It isn't ready, I tell you. :P It is a mess that needs no eyes but my own for the moment. However, wanna brainstorm with me?
frigg
Aug. 13th, 2012 08:56 pm (UTC)
Sure. :)
mindseas
Aug. 12th, 2012 09:25 pm (UTC)
For me, it's a little glimpse of Mirco's future that I haven't seen as yet.
mnfaure
Aug. 13th, 2012 08:51 pm (UTC)
*nods* From his adventures in book two. :)
asakiyume
Aug. 13th, 2012 05:17 am (UTC)
I like it! I got the scene instantly.
mnfaure
Aug. 13th, 2012 08:49 pm (UTC)
I like writing Mirco. I had his voice down pat in book 1, but alas, it is taking me longer to get back into it in bk 2.
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